Thursday, 19 April 2018

QUIVER

The Bellowing of Trees
The Rustling of Leaves
The Bone Chilling Breeze
Infectious Maladies
Inscrutable Decrees
Negotiable Loyalties
Simulated Pleasantries
Unpleasant Memories
Forbidden Fantasies
Yeah, All of These

They Make Me Quiver...



22 comments:

  1. wowo.. brilliant. love the things that make you quiver.

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    1. Thanks Deepa. Glad you liked it :)

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  2. Superb play on words, and so apt too

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    1. Hey Shadow. Thanks a ton. Long time no see. How have you been?

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  3. You get it on point all the time .. and in such a poetic way .. ur giving words to feelings hard to express ..

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    1. Thank you Pratibha. That comment made my day :)

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  4. Your poems always have a great rhythm to them. I can feel them as I read.

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    1. Thanks a ton smsaves. That means a lot coming from you :)

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  5. Love it.. my kid of poetry. Priya from priyreflects

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  6. the build up - from nature to human emotions was really good Chris https://akswrites.com/2018/04/19/rendezvous-atozchallenge-blogchattera2z/

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  7. Wonder what you do when you encounter them Criss. This poem demands a sequel Criss.

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    1. Glad you liked it Anagha. I don't think this deserves a sequel. Unless there are more fears I encounter along the way :)

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  8. Good Job Criss..... Love the way u write poems........ Good choice of words :)

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  9. Hmm.. we all have these unpleasant quivers somewhere in deep dark secret of heart.
    Another lovely post from you Cris.

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  10. I love the way you play with words Criss. That makes the poem more intriguing.

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    1. Thanks Anami. Thrilled to have made such an impact on you :)

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