Thursday, 19 April 2018

QUIVER

The Bellowing of Trees
The Rustling of Leaves
The Bone Chilling Breeze
Infectious Maladies
Inscrutable Decrees
Negotiable Loyalties
Simulated Pleasantries
Unpleasant Memories
Forbidden Fantasies
Yeah, All of These

They Make Me Quiver...



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22 comments:

  1. Deepa19 April 2018 at 21:06

    wowo.. brilliant. love the things that make you quiver.

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  2. Shadow19 April 2018 at 21:11

    Superb play on words, and so apt too

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    1. CRD22 April 2018 at 23:01

      Hey Shadow. Thanks a ton. Long time no see. How have you been?

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  3. Ashwini S. Menon19 April 2018 at 23:09

    When words make you feel...

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  4. Unknown20 April 2018 at 01:30

    You get it on point all the time .. and in such a poetic way .. ur giving words to feelings hard to express ..

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    1. CRD22 April 2018 at 23:02

      Thank you Pratibha. That comment made my day :)

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  5. Anonymous20 April 2018 at 07:58

    Your poems always have a great rhythm to them. I can feel them as I read.

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    1. CRD22 April 2018 at 23:02

      Thanks a ton smsaves. That means a lot coming from you :)

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  6. Anonymous20 April 2018 at 10:35

    Love it.. my kid of poetry. Priya from priyreflects

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  7. Akshata Ram20 April 2018 at 11:18

    the build up - from nature to human emotions was really good Chris https://akswrites.com/2018/04/19/rendezvous-atozchallenge-blogchattera2z/

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  8. Anagha Yatin20 April 2018 at 15:44

    Wonder what you do when you encounter them Criss. This poem demands a sequel Criss.

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    1. CRD22 April 2018 at 23:04

      Glad you liked it Anagha. I don't think this deserves a sequel. Unless there are more fears I encounter along the way :)

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  9. CHERYL DSOUZA20 April 2018 at 23:04

    Good Job Criss..... Love the way u write poems........ Good choice of words :)

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  10. Dipika22 April 2018 at 10:41

    Hmm.. we all have these unpleasant quivers somewhere in deep dark secret of heart.
    Another lovely post from you Cris.

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  11. Anonymous24 April 2018 at 23:10

    I love the way you play with words Criss. That makes the poem more intriguing.

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    1. CRD29 April 2018 at 23:39

      Thanks Anami. Thrilled to have made such an impact on you :)

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