Wednesday, 25 August 2010

LOVE.PARASITE.


You Cast Your Spell
I Burn In Hell

I Wish You Well
You Toll The Bell
Nay, Not The Bell
You Toll My Knell

Your Pleasure
My Pain
I'm Hurt
Again

I Bare My Soul
You Dig A Hole
I Brace For Falls
To Scale Your Wall

And While I Climb
My Feet They Slip
I Lick My Wounds
My Gash I Grip

And Though Submissive
To My Fate
In Earnest Hope
For Thee I Wait..


- CRD

46 comments:

  1. hey cristo...nice one !!
    is dat u in the pic?! :D

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    1. Thanks Mel.

      You find him hot? :p It's me then ;)

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  2. hey Chris..CMIE mein koi mil gayi kya?

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  3. put in some rock tune into these words...tht wud sound "perfect" ;)
    by the way..u found ur look-alike kya? :D

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    1. Rock tune? I think death metal would be more apt

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  4. Great work
    Awesome poem
    you have used very nice words

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    1. Are you Vinayak Nagri? Thanks :)

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  5. Aditi Kulkarni24 July 2011 at 22:47

    y so glum though?

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    1. Isse glum nahi, gam kehte hain ;)

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  6. Aaaah ... Love ... !! Never easy .. :-)

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  7. love n longing go hand in hand...!

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    1. Thanks Neha. Where are you? No more blog posts?

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  9. what an ironical love.."Your pleasure my pain.." :) nevertheless, that is love...

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  10. :) .. satirical approach to tragic love.. nice

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  11. Gripping. Loved the symbolism. Me likes!

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  12. Abigail Rodrigues24 July 2011 at 23:06

    LIKES!! a lot!!

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  13. Intriguing... Nicely done, mate!

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  14. I'm gonna crack a sad one first....if ur waiting for me to post on ur wall, its gonna be a long time daaahlin :D ... I loved the archaic english ... For whom does the bell toll though Chris ?

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    1. Whats this thing about posting on my wall? :O

      I'm married now Marj :P

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  15. love the flavor... neat style and lovely old prose

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  16. Now this is something refreshing in a very different sort of a way! Chris... this was AMAZING. I mean its been REALLY long since I read something like this!
    (:

    I miss your work. Do it more often!!!!!

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  17. Hmmmmmm.......always the same story....hoping and waitin.....just a different cast.

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    1. Well said Hina :). Its an oft-repeated story that almost everyone can relate to. And then there are some who're on the other side of the fence. Wonder how they must be feeling :)

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  18. I really felt this one. Great post :-)

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    1. Thanks C.C. Means a lot coming from someone like you :)

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