You Cast Your Spell
I Burn In Hell
I Wish You Well
You Toll The Bell
Nay, Not The Bell
You Toll My Knell
Your Pleasure
My Pain
I'm Hurt
Again
I Bare My Soul
You Dig A Hole
I Brace For Falls
To Scale Your Wall
And While I Climb
My Feet They Slip
I Lick My Wounds
My Gash I Grip
And Though Submissive
To My Fate
In Earnest Hope
For Thee I Wait..
- CRD
nice words...
ReplyDeletesigh - really good :-).
ReplyDeletehey cristo...nice one !!
ReplyDeleteis dat u in the pic?! :D
hey Chris..CMIE mein koi mil gayi kya?
ReplyDeleteput in some rock tune into these words...tht wud sound "perfect" ;)
ReplyDeleteby the way..u found ur look-alike kya? :D
nice :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem
you have used very nice words
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whoooohooo blogeratti...i liked..
ReplyDeletey so glum though?
ReplyDeleteAaaah ... Love ... !! Never easy .. :-)
ReplyDeletelove n longing go hand in hand...!
ReplyDeleteoooh! i like i like!
ReplyDeletewhat an ironical love.."Your pleasure my pain.." :) nevertheless, that is love...
ReplyDelete:) .. satirical approach to tragic love.. nice
ReplyDeletegrim-unlike!!!!
ReplyDeleteGripping. Loved the symbolism. Me likes!
ReplyDeleteLIKES!! a lot!!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing... Nicely done, mate!
ReplyDeleteI'm gonna crack a sad one first....if ur waiting for me to post on ur wall, its gonna be a long time daaahlin :D ... I loved the archaic english ... For whom does the bell toll though Chris ?
ReplyDeletelove the flavor... neat style and lovely old prose
ReplyDeleteNow this is something refreshing in a very different sort of a way! Chris... this was AMAZING. I mean its been REALLY long since I read something like this!
ReplyDelete(:
I miss your work. Do it more often!!!!!
Hmmmmmm.......always the same story....hoping and waitin.....just a different cast.
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