You Cast Your Spell
I Burn In Hell
I Wish You Well
You Toll The Bell
Nay, Not The Bell
You Toll My Knell
Your Pleasure
My Pain
I'm Hurt
Again
I Bare My Soul
You Dig A Hole
I Brace For Falls
To Scale Your Wall
And While I Climb
My Feet They Slip
I Lick My Wounds
My Gash I Grip
And Though Submissive
To My Fate
In Earnest Hope
For Thee I Wait..
- CRD
nice words...
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks :)
Deletesigh - really good :-).
ReplyDeleteThanks Raaji :)
Deletehey cristo...nice one !!
ReplyDeleteis dat u in the pic?! :D
Thanks Mel.
DeleteYou find him hot? :p It's me then ;)
hey Chris..CMIE mein koi mil gayi kya?
ReplyDeleteHahaha :P
Deleteput in some rock tune into these words...tht wud sound "perfect" ;)
ReplyDeleteby the way..u found ur look-alike kya? :D
Rock tune? I think death metal would be more apt
Deletenice :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem
you have used very nice words
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Deletewhoooohooo blogeratti...i liked..
ReplyDeleteThanks Radhika :)
Deletey so glum though?
ReplyDeleteIsse glum nahi, gam kehte hain ;)
DeleteAaaah ... Love ... !! Never easy .. :-)
ReplyDeleteYou said it :)
Deletelove n longing go hand in hand...!
ReplyDeletePerfecto!
Deleteoooh! i like i like!
ReplyDeleteThanks Neha. Where are you? No more blog posts?
Deletewhat an ironical love.."Your pleasure my pain.." :) nevertheless, that is love...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sachi :)
Delete:) .. satirical approach to tragic love.. nice
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Alisha :)
Deletegrim-unlike!!!!
ReplyDeleteAww. :(
DeleteGripping. Loved the symbolism. Me likes!
ReplyDeleteThanks Queen of Tampa :P
DeleteLIKES!! a lot!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Abby
DeleteIntriguing... Nicely done, mate!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kartz
DeleteI'm gonna crack a sad one first....if ur waiting for me to post on ur wall, its gonna be a long time daaahlin :D ... I loved the archaic english ... For whom does the bell toll though Chris ?
ReplyDeleteWhats this thing about posting on my wall? :O
DeleteI'm married now Marj :P
love the flavor... neat style and lovely old prose
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it :)
DeleteNow this is something refreshing in a very different sort of a way! Chris... this was AMAZING. I mean its been REALLY long since I read something like this!
ReplyDelete(:
I miss your work. Do it more often!!!!!
Sure will Shane. Thanks :)
DeleteHmmmmmm.......always the same story....hoping and waitin.....just a different cast.
ReplyDeleteWell said Hina :). Its an oft-repeated story that almost everyone can relate to. And then there are some who're on the other side of the fence. Wonder how they must be feeling :)
DeleteI really felt this one. Great post :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks C.C. Means a lot coming from someone like you :)
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