Friday, 4 December 2009

WISH YOU KNEW...


A Slight Little Trembling Bend Of My Lips
Won't Be The Only Way To Smile At You Then

A Stolen Glance From The Corner Of My Eye
Won't Be The Only Way To Look At You Then

A Shed Of A Teardrop And Lips On A Photograph
Won't Be The Only Way To Kiss You Then

WISH I'D TOLD YOU ALREADY...


.......But Then, I Really Wonder,
If You'd Ever Even Laugh At Me Then....

16 comments:

  1. :) .. that was sad.. bt very good! nice writing there...

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  2. nicely written...
    straight and simple.

    But the pic is disturbing

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  3. I Liked the way it is written, reflects the importance of every word written (by capitalizing it).The imagination is loud and it is very well portrayed in words.

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  4. Melancholic, but touching. Loved the way the words are strung.

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  5. touching...
    simple and to the point..
    :) loved it..as always!

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  6. That was so simple, yet brilliant. Loved the flow of words.

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  7. Well written! As simple as possible... And is there a connection between the poem and the pic? You could've chosen a better one! Anyway, nice work! Keep writing!

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  8. Chris re. :) Touched my soul.

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  10. that was awesome!Came straight from ur heart!

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  11. M Speechless...too Good..Very touching.. Keep it up!

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  12. Very informative, keep posting such good articles, it really helps to know about things.

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