Sunday, 17 February 2008
लौट आओ LAUT AAO
बरसों बीत चुके, जबसे हमें छोड़ गई तुम,
हम हँसना भूल गए हैं, यूँ तनहा छोड़ गई तुम,
सदाएँ तेरी सुनके, दीदार तेरा पाके,
कुछ अरसे बीत चुके हैं, याद आती अब भी हो तुम।
भुला न पाऊं तुमको, मेरी यादों में न आओ,
आना ही गर है तुमको, तों ज़िंदगी में आओ।
जब जाना ही था तुमको, तों दिल को क्यों चुराया,
दिल का शहर बसाकर, उसी को क्यों उजाडा,
लौट आओ मेरे हमदम, उजाडा फिर बसाओ,
राह देखती हैं आँखें, न और तुम सताओ।
जब से गई हो जानम, मुड़कर न देखा तुमने,
हम जलते हैं या बुझ गए, रूककर न पूछा तुमने,
मेरा गुनाह क्या है? बस चाहता हूँ तुमको,
तुम भी गुनाह करती, क्यों यूँ सज़ा दी तुमने?
दिल-ए-बरबाद को अब तक है इंतज़ार तेरा,
लौट आओगी तुम इक दिन, है एतबार मेरा,
हम रोज़ अश्क पीते, गम में डूबा करते हैं,
रोज़ बनता हैं लहू से, मुझसे तस्वीर तेरा।
दिल में पनाह दो तुम, या फिर फना ही कर दो,
या तोह तुम याद न आओ, या फिर बाहों मे आओ।
आ जाओ, लौट आओ।
आ जाओ, लौट आओ।
For those of you, who's browsers dont support hindi script, or the hindi seems to be jumbled up, heres the same poem in English Script
Barson beet chuke, jabse humein chhod gayi tum,
Hum hasna bhool gaye,
yun tanha chhod gayi tum,
Sadayein teri sunke, deedar tera paake,
kuch arsey beet chuke hain, yaad aati ab bhi ho tum.
Bhula na paaun tumko, meri yaadon mein na aao,
Aana hi gar hai tumko, toh zindagi mein aao.
Jab jaana hi tha tumko, toh dil ko kyun churaya?
Dil ka shahar basaakar, usi ko kyun ujaada?
Laut aao mere humdum, ujaada phir basao,
Raah dekhti hain aankhein, na aur tum sataao.
Jab se gayi ho jaanam, mudkar na dekha tumne,
Hum jalte hain ya bujh gaye, ruk-kar na poocha tumne,
Mera gunaah kya hai? Bas chaahta hoon tumko,
Tum bhi gunaah karti, kyun yun sazaa dee tumne?
Dil-e-barbaad ko ab tak hai intezaar tera,
Laut aaogi tum ik din, hai aetbaar mera,
Hum roz ashq peete, gham mein dooba karte hain,
Roz banta hai lahoo se, mujhse tasveer tera.
Dil mein panaah do tum, ya phir fanaa hi kar do,
Ya toh tum yaad na aao, ya phir baahon mein aao.
Aa jao, Laut ao....
Aa jao, Laut ao....
kaash hamare liye bhi koi likhta..
ReplyDeleteawesome post yaar.. i loved every single line of it.. best thing is tht i undrstud it too :P
ReplyDeletethanx for da comment ms chitranna
ReplyDeleteand good u finally understood a hindi poem of mine [:P]
kaash aapke liye bhi koi likhta?? kyu madam? do u want some poor guy to screww his life and get depressed becoz of u?
i do have another idea to post but its like a story and seems to long.. dunno wat to do
kyu yaar.. why get depressed coz of me??!!! btw.. i've nt found time to tell ya.. u're neva online.. busy-body!! i might hv jus found a guy.. tell u more later
ReplyDeleteabout the post.. story boleto??? just post anythng re.. u read my water bulb thingi naa.. i jus happened to find tht paper while cleaning my cupboard.. if its urs.. post it :P wud love to read it.. :)
haila...no wonder aajkal touch mein nahin rehti...sahi hai[:d]
ReplyDeletekya karta hai? sahi hai, one more frnd has bit da dust.[:p]...and here i am waiting to get a bite.sha, mebbe i shudve proposed to u before he did [:P]
btw, mebbe, jus mebbe i have an idea who that mahaashay is..
anyways talk to u in da future(if u do spare some of ur precious time)
u wud've proposed me??!!
ReplyDeleten u kno who it is??? kaise??? i wanna knw.. matlab kaun??
btw..kya yaar.. we're talkin thru d comment box :( !!!
nice poem....dontfeel like commenting anything, because whatever i say, would fade before the wondeful chit chat u friends are having.....( probabli should not ave read the comments!!!)
ReplyDeleteanyways...it was a nice read...
@ New Philosopher
ReplyDeleteur free to comment anything u want.. :P
good one :) actually i don knw hindi.. i askd my frd to explain it.. tats y didn leave comments yesterday..
ReplyDeletetc
hey chris!
ReplyDeletewhat a surprising try! :)
u sure love altering ur style!
u shud hav typed da same stuff in english script.... coz the hindi script isn't really accurate...
as in - 'dil' is read as 'dali' and 'phir' as 'fari' :) and few other words here n there too....
pleeeaseee post it once more using the english script na? id like to read it again...
coz tho i was able to read it this time.. i really wanna njoy it too!! :)
Whoa! Deep :D
ReplyDeleteAnd ya, like someone else commented, please keep the chit-chat going :P
Like they say its better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all...
ReplyDeleteAnd if u write poetry like this ur next love is not far away...
actually no, i feel its better to not love at all than to love and then lose someone. its terrible.
ReplyDeleteand i feel love happens only once
nice job! keep it up~
ReplyDelete@philosopher - nahi yaar..u can read all the comments u want...and leave some too :P
ReplyDelete@anonymous - ok man
@nins- ok gal..aapka hukum sar-aankhon par
@karthik-the chit-chat is not the main feature yaar..its the post right? [:P]
@vicek and numb - thanks :)
man, "u r setting standards for love"...
ReplyDeletei wrote an appreciation yesterday but due to some reason it didnt appear.. now that i ve read this stuff again, i felt only this...
way to go my bro!!
awesome poem dude.. lautke aana hi padega unhe ise padkar.. shayar tho dekha hain hum magar aap jaisa nahin..
ReplyDeletenice poem
ReplyDeletekeep it up
http://www.superstarvinayak.blogspot.com
Nice song.
ReplyDeleteIts quite indepth....nice
ReplyDeletenice poem..
ReplyDeleter u heart broken
il-e-barbaad ko ab tak hai intezaar tera,
ReplyDeleteLaut aaogi tum ik din, hai aetbaar mera,
Hum roz ashq peete, gham mein dooba karte hain,
Roz banta hai lahoo se, mujhse tasveer tera.
incredible, i hope/wish/pray that she comes back, she will have to i think, reading this, she will have to.
its beautiful, the way you've said it all and soecifically this stanza.
i didnt know you write poems as well and that too in hindi wow!
*i'm a fan now* :)
@av dinesh - thnk you my friend [:)]
ReplyDelete@mano - thnx man.....
ReplyDeleteabt her coming bk...nevermind.
@vinayak - ur sick man! [:P] do u copy paste ur comments?
ReplyDelete@diva - song??:O
ReplyDelete@umme - thnx :)
ReplyDelete@ishqia - hmm..what do u think? :p
ReplyDelete@asbah - u love it...ur my fan?? thnks dear :d
ReplyDeleteoh btw i dont think shes ever coming back
just so beautiful...i wish i wrote it!! :)
ReplyDelete@shruti - thnx dear:)
ReplyDeleteand no, i dont wish ud ever have to write something like dat