Saturday, 8 March 2008

HUMSAFAR AUR TANHAI


हमसफ़र हमें अपनी राह पर हाथों मे हाथ लेकर चलता है,
तन्हाई हमें अपनी राह खुद बनाना सिखाती है।

हमसफ़र सोच से सोच मिल लेता है,

तन्हाई हमें खुद सोचने को मजबूर करती है।

हमसफ़र की बाहों में सपने सच होते नज़र आते हैं,

तन्हाई के घेरे में हम सपने देखते ज़रूर हैं,
लेकिन हम यह भी जान लेते हैं कि वो शायद कभी सच नहीं होंगे।

हमसफ़र ज़िंदगी के हर कदम पर साथ देने की कसमें खाता हैं,

लेकिन कसमें तोडी भी जा सकती हैं।
तन्हाई कोई वादा नहीं करती,

लेकिन सबके छोड़ देने पर वही साथ देती है।

हमसफ़र साथ छोड़ता है तो हम सब कुछ खो देते हैं,
पर तन्हाई हमें छोड़ देते वक्त वह सब कुछ दे देती है,
जिनकी हम तमन्ना करते थे।

तो क्या तन्हाई ही हमारा सच्चा हमसफ़र है?

Humsafar Humein Apni Raah Par Haathon Mein Haath Lekar Chalta Hai
Tanhai Humein Apni Raah Khud Banaana Sikhati Hai

Humsafar Soch Se Soch Mila Leta Hai
Tanhai Humein Khud Sochne Ko Majboor Karti Hai

Humsafar Ke Baahon Mein Sapne Sach Hote Nazar Aate Hain
Tanhai Ke Ghere Mein Hum Sapne Dekhte Zaroor Hain,
Lekin Hum Yeh Bhi Jaan Lete Hain Ki Woh Shayad Kabhi Sach Nahin Honge

Humsafar Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Saath Dene Ki Kasmein Khaata Hai
Lekin Kasmein Todi Bhi Jaa Sakti Hain
Tanhai Koi Vaada Nahin Karti
Lekin Sabke Chhod Dene Par Wahi Saath Deti Hai

Humsafar Saath Chhodta Hai Toh Hum Sab Kuch Kho Dete Hain
Par Tanhai Humein Chhod Dete Waqt Woh Sab Kuch De Deti Hai
Jinki Hum Tamanna Karte The

Toh Kya Tanhai Hi Hamara Sacha Humsafar Hai?

42 comments:

  1. dude!!! awesome re.. loved it very much!!! :) simply superb..

    not tanhai..WE are our best companions..

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  2. your blog name 'crissdude' completely betrays the content in ur blog! I never expected 'crissdude' to write such deep thots and efficient poetry and that too in hindi...
    hats off!

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  3. @ ssnab-well the credit goes to your message actually, as u know

    @pranay-lol..well i had no choice man. i had to use an already existing gmail id to register on blogspot. thanx for the comment. and oh, ive written a poem in english too

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  4. quite brilliant buddy...very intricate

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  5. हमसफ़र ज़िंदगी के हर कदम पर साथ देने की कसमें खाता हैं,
    लेकिन कसमें तोडी भी जा सकती हैं।
    तन्हाई कोई वादा नहीं करती,
    लेकिन सबके छोड़ देने पर वही साथ देती है।

    i liked des lines

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  6. so simple and simply amazing.. so true.. so experienced.. tanhai wil be our best companion.. wahi sab kuch sikate hain..
    tanhai sikate hain jaan rakhna.. humsafar sikate hain kisi par jaan rakhna

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  7. @kenneth and saransh - thanx a lot guys :)

    @manorath - :)

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  8. Bahut khoob, i appreciate u for writing in english. thnx :)

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  9. awesome poem and i can like ur poem and its superb ....tanhaiiiiiiiiyaa

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  10. hmm..nice poetry and thanks for praising mine....
    may i knw ur inspiration?;)

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  11. @sunny - well thanx for da comment. i wrote it in english too, since a few readers told me that the hindi used to get messed up on their pcs, since their systems didnt support hindi script. the spellings used to get messed up. thts the reason

    @kanika - thanx:)

    @mr mittal - hmm....my frnd sent me an sms on loneliness. that and my own experience inspired me...

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  12. subhanallah! Mashaallah! :D

    hindi bhasha mein itna khoob blog post bade dino baad dikha

    Salaam! :P

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  13. very well written...loved it....!!

    keep writing :)

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  14. deewar dar utarkar, parchaiyaan bolti hai.
    koi nahi bolta jab tanhaaiyan bolti hai.

    one second with a beloved is worth hundred years of solitude!!! what say?

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  15. humsafar aur thanhaaai..
    heyy mere dosth thanhaaa na hooo...
    kisiko apnaa banaa loo...thanhaai se dosthi achee naheee hai

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  16. Tanhai Koi Vaada Nahin Karti
    Lekin Sabke Chhod Dene Par Wahi Saath Deti Hai...

    loved the lines!

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  17. sahi likha hai bhai....keep it cumin...

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  18. man!!!


    great!!!


    kya creativity hai!!!

    keep it up dude..

    keep posting!!

    :-)

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  19. @comfortably numb - shukriya...shukriya :)

    @sourav - thank you:)

    @philosopher - waah..loved ur lines...wat u say is absolutely sorrect, but a second without the one you love is like hundred years of solitude. more than a 10000000 billion years have passed for me

    @aslam - koi tanhaiyee ke baahon mein dhakel kar chali gayi, hum kya karte

    @matangi and sid-:)

    @wanderlust - thank u man :)

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  20. in response to your comment on my blog...Its an Oscar winning English movie :P

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  21. it was wonderful
    I liked the last line
    keep posting

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  23. beautiful poem.
    can i post it on my blog with your name?

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  24. Wonnnly for such insight will i strain and struggle to read my Rashtriya bhaasha and check for syntax and grammatical errors :P

    " And then my heart with pleasure fills
    And dances with the Daffodils"

    I'll be back :P ... do keep writing that which echoes my layman's thoughts.

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  25. Nice man! really nice! How I wish I could write poetry in hindi..But I got no vocabulary :(

    Anyway I agree that yes "tanhai" is our true humsafar. Its all about you and your soul and your life..Mould it the way you want :)

    Cheers!

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  26. hmm..SUperb...

    WEl..everything has its pros n cons isn't...!!

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  27. SImply beautiful.... havnt read such a good post in hindi for very long....

    i think...the best thing in lyfe is lonelines(tanhai), bcos it teaches u everythin and wen u lose it u get everything.....

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  28. @rashi - u commented on my post or urs? [:O]

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  29. @viniman vinayak - u r sick man [:d]

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  30. @marj - hehe, nice excerpt from daffodils. hope u understood though ;)

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  31. @hitesh - thnx :) aapne mere muh ki baat cheen li [:d]

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  32. Tanhai Hi Hamara Sacha Humsafar Hai?

    Loved this line!

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  33. waah waah...wah huzoor CRD boliye ;)

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  34. wah! nice! ur good in hindi poetry! tanhai humara sath hai..:)

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  35. Beautifully written.Did you write this????Thanks for the translation .

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