Sunday, 7 August 2011

THE SNITCH


Goga sucked the last puff in very slowly. He knew he’d finally run out of cigarettes.

“What’s the little rat’s name again?”, he asked, treading on the stub.

“I think the boss said Abdul”, replied Tony, rubbing his eyes and stifling a cough or two. Being nicotine-intolerant wasn’t appreciated in his business circles.

“Hmm..Abdul. That snitch has been letting the cops in on our coke business for months now. We’ve lost consignments worth at least 15 million so far because of that kid. He’s gotta go down.”

“The boss said this is the area he frequents. No other clues though. No one knows what he looks like. We don’t even know if that’s his real name.”

“Damn”, swore Goga under his breath, instinctively rummaging through his pockets for another ciggie. He swore again after he remembered he’d run out of stock. “So, how then are we supposed to find him.”

Tony only shrugged his shoulders.

Just then, a lame man emerged from the crowd. He was seated on a mini-cart, propelling himself forward using his hands. He suddenly burst out into a song.

Aate Jaate Hue Main Sab-pe Nazar Rakhta Hun

Aate Jaate Hue Main Sab-pe Nazar Rakhta Hun

Naam Abdul Hai Mera, Sabki Khabar Rakhta Hun...

Tony and Goga looked at each other and scratched their heads for a couple of seconds. When realisation suddenly dawned upon them, they smiled, gave each other high-fives, rubbed their hands in anticipation of their scalp, and went looking for the singer.

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22 comments:

  1. very nicely written dear...... m sooo proud of u...... keep it up...:-)

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  2. The most essential gift for a good writer is a built-in, shock-proof, shit detector. This is the writer's radar and all great writers have had it. ....... you too have it Christopher......
    Good job done

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  3. Hahhahah..this was really a sweet shocker. Lovely. You know how to twist it all.

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  4. He he.. That was one humurous twist :P.. Nice one..

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  5. Whatte twist!! :D Unexpected. I thought it was going in the direction of a mafia story.
    I likes.

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  6. Awesome bro! :D Bwahaha! Can't stop laughing now, lol. :D :P

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  7. Hahahaha... WTF dude! this was crazy!!! awesome!

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  8. HAHAHA !
    Simply wonderful. This is exactly what I love about your words.

    Cheers,
    R.R

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  9. Ohhh this is some good stuff Crissy :)

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  10. @Sandhya - Woah. That was really flattering :) I humby accept your compliment :) Thanks for visiting:)

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  11. @Red Handed - Hey, Thanks :)

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  12. @Sunil Padiyar - Thanks a ton dude :) On a personal note though, I think it wasn't that creative in this post. Do visit again :)

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  13. @lavita - Gracias Lavuu :)

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  14. @Priyanka - Was just trying to show how stupid our movies are :P Thnx

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  15. @Pranay - Hey thanks for visiting bro :) Cheers

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